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Corrijam minha redação porfavooor Hi Anna, It’s great to talk with you again! Wow, I can’t believe

Corrijam minha redação porfavooor

Hi Anna,

It’s great to talk with you again! Wow, I can’t believe it, you are so sick, I hope you’re fine now. I think you will be ok when the university gets started.

Yeah, I’m great, thanks for the ask. I’m been playing football all the time and watching Netflix. My family is very well. Here everything it’s ok. And I’m happy for your brother, he’ll get along on in his new job.

My God! What good news! I will be waiting for you. if you are going to stay somewhere, stay at the diplomat hotel, because there are good prices and nice bedrooms. Of course, I can show you the city, it would be a pleasure. We can go to the cathedral, esplanade of ministries, tv tower or pontoon. Every place in Brasília is beautiful.

Take care,

Guilherme

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tai2242 · Answer 1 · 2020-05-30 02:14:03

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30/05/2020

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You are so sick, I hope you’re fine now. (aqui ficou um pouco confuso o passado e presente) eu colocaria ou you are so sick, I hope you get better soon ou you were so sick, I hope you're fine now
thanks for the ask ficaria melhor se colocasse thanks for asking
What good news! seria melhor what A good news
Here everything it’s ok seria melhor Everything's ok here
Acho que é só isso que ficou um pouco estranho, mas o resto tá perfeito, deu pra entender tudo.

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